I really like this piece, and I love the concept of it. I love how you've done the shading in ovals and circles and used different textures - it's extremely creative and shows a different type of drawing or conceptualisation that people don't normally see.
However, for some reason I can't get over the lips. There's something about them that jars me and I don't really like how they've been drawn. The rest of your drawing shows such depth and character to it, and I like the tiny circles that make up the lips, but I feel like they're too flat in terms of shading when looking at what you've managed to do with the rest of the piece.
That being said, I think if the circles in the lips varied more in terms of how dark or light they were, it would make it fantastic. As it is, the lips are just a bit too flat and need that extra dimension that you've shown you're capable of.
Otherwise, it's a stunning piece and I love the stark contrasts prevalent throughout it as well as the realistic AND surreal qualities of it. Great job!
Really appreciate all the different textures and approaches you used in this picture. I'm especially taken with the cross-hatching/oval linework on the face. Really fun!
However, for some reason I can't get over the lips. There's something about them that jars me and I don't really like how they've been drawn. The rest of your drawing shows such depth and character to it, and I like the tiny circles that make up the lips, but I feel like they're too flat in terms of shading when looking at what you've managed to do with the rest of the piece.
That being said, I think if the circles in the lips varied more in terms of how dark or light they were, it would make it fantastic. As it is, the lips are just a bit too flat and need that extra dimension that you've shown you're capable of.
Otherwise, it's a stunning piece and I love the stark contrasts prevalent throughout it as well as the realistic AND surreal qualities of it. Great job!
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