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However, for some reason I can't get over the lips. There's something about them that jars me and I don't really like how they've been drawn. The rest of your drawing shows such depth and character to it, and I like the tiny circles that make up the lips, but I feel like they're too flat in terms of shading when looking at what you've managed to do with the rest of the piece.
That being said, I think if the circles in the lips varied more in terms of how dark or light they were, it would make it fantastic. As it is, the lips are just a bit too flat and need that extra dimension that you've shown you're capable of.
Otherwise, it's a stunning piece and I love the stark contrasts prevalent throughout it as well as the realistic AND surreal qualities of it. Great job!
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